Editing

 We imported different tracks to feature in our film, such as  a heartbeat noise while she is stumbling down the underpass taking drugs and the dub-step song while she is at the party. We had to change the order in which we fitted these tracks and also had to trim part of the clips so we had the right beat and tempo for that part of the film we wanted it to fit.

We changed some of the audio adjustments on the track so that we wasn't using copyright and also so that it sounded faint as if they were outside of the party, only hearing the muffling noise of the bass.

Editing

We also sped some bits up and slowed down others, we slowed down the scene in which she is being sick this is to show the effects of drugs and to have more of an impact to the audience.

Editing

We edited the colour of the discovering of the dead body scene because we felt it didn't look as we wanted it to, we wanted to have more of a scary effect so changed to a slightly more darker colour to add to the dinginess and darkness of the atmosphere and the area in which it was discovered.

Editing

When we had all the footage in the right order we then started to add in transitions to make the different clips flow better. An example of this is when we used the cross blur transition after smoke is blown into the camera, this is to give the illusion she is unaware of what has happened after she has taken the drugs and then is at the party.

Editing

When we first imported the filming of our party scene the quality wasn't very clear and we couldn't see a lot of the images due to the strobe light we had, therefore we had to edit it to make it clearer. We changed the brightness over 50%, we increased the contrast levels and also changed the colour to black and white this was so that there were two obvious different colours in the clip so it was more distinctive to see.

Evaluation

Our filming at Danson underpass and the flat location overall went well, the filming at the underpass required more actors to help us out and this was one of our main problems, we found it hard to find people that we wanted to fit the more ‘street look’ so we had to make them fit more how we wanted by the way we dressed them. We wanted the boys to be in dark clothes and hoodies looking rough rather than smart tops and hair perfect, as for the girls we wanted a range of some to have dark lipstick on to show the slightly rebellious, daring, party side and others to be in dark grunge clothes.  For the filming of the discovery of the dead body after the party we needed the actors to look more distressed with smudged make up, hair wild, as if they had been not aware of what they were doing, moreover the make up on the dead girl was even more smudged with blood all over her neck to show signs of a struggle. 

  I feel the filming at the flat location when discovering the dead body was a more successful days filming, as it was just the 4 people in our group we required we got it done quicker because  we were all aware of what we wanted to do and how we needed to do it. We took all the make-up and props we needed to make the characters how we needed them to.  The flat was the ideal place to shoot this scene it added to the grittiness and dirtiness of the urban teenagers film, we thought the place where the dead body was found was good as it was an enclosed space outside of the party. The filming at Danson underpass took a bit longer than we originally thought as we had to make sure everyone was coming on time and put them in their places of where we wanted them to be. The shooting script covered most eventualities along with the plan we did before, this did help us; as we followed where we had put people and the different types of camera angles we were going to use.

Discovering The Dead Body Scene

 We used fake blood and food coloring to make the blood look real. we also smudged our actors make up to show that they were drunk and messed up their hair. we especially messed up the actor who was dead's make up and hair to show she had been through a struggle we also smudges mascara on her arms to make bruises.

the costumes show elements of grunge and the nirvana t-shirt helps to appeal to the teenage audience and show our gritty teenage horror genre

Jennifer's Body

For our research we looked at many different film opening clips in our genre, this film is an american teen horror and as we have incorporated both elements of a teen drama and a horror into our opening we chose to deconstruct some.

Sound: 
At the beginning of the clip non diegetic sound is used, the music being played is very eerie , this creates a spooky atmosphere and sets the tone for the film as the camera moves forward towards the house we hear the wind blowing and a horse neighing these sounds, suggest there is not much other activity going on around the area so creates the sense of loneliness. As the girl appears in the window the music abruptly stops and changes to add to the impact of something scary happening. later on in the clip when she is thrown into the sectioned room for misbehaving the music that is played is fairly upbeat this is used to try and relax or make whoever is in there more relaxed and happy and calm again. 


Camera angles:
When they show the girl in her bedroom at the beginning of the clip they use a close up shot of her scratching her arm and putting her hair in her mouth. The scratching could convey feelings of anxiety, or she is worried about what might happen, it could also suggest boredom which again follows the feeling of loneliness and not feeling safe when people are alone, which is enforced by the howling of the wind and strange noises in the background. When the camera shows the other girl appear at the window suddenly, the girl in the bed doesn't see her only the audience do, this could symbolise how something will happen to the girl but she won't be aware of what will happen to her before, following the typical genre. Later on in the clip when the girl is sectioned off into he little room they use a close up on her face to show the expression of desperation and slight loss of sanity in her eyes, as the camera follows her eyes up to the window we know she wants to break out of there and be free again. 


 Editing: 

Cross cuts are used at the beginning to show the camera moving forward through the garden up to the house and then into the girls bedroom, this is to show something will happen between these 2 places simultaneously, and as it gets closer towards the window the movement slows down and the girls face appears abruptly. 

Mise en scene
The girls room in the beginning of the clip is quite girly with pink lampshades next to her bed and pictures behind her bed, likes to keep good memories she's quite innocent, which later is juxtaposed with the other scenes of being in a mental institute. When the girl is talking while getting dressed we never see her face, they show close up of the scars on her body which causes us to think as to why this has happened, she wants to hide away from the camera as she wants to hide from society. The camera pans across the mess in the room could be trying to represent the mess of her mental stability at the moment, her stuff is everywhere in  the room but she's not bothered by this. When she kicks the woman across the table in the canteen this shows her aggressive side, she gets angry very easily as they call her 'kicker'. When she is put into the room alone the camera has an aerial shot of a cross in the middle of floor, it could be a reflection from the windows, but a cross is usually used to signal danger or to tell people to keep out so we can predict something dangerous will happen to this character. Finally as the camera tilts up to show the windows at the very top it shows they are locked so she has no way of getting out, she is trapped and she is psychologically trapped in her mind.

Sketches of our planning - STORY BOARD

Sketches of our planning - Underpass

This is the underpass plan, this helped us to organise people and their positions. also the way we were going to film is planned out, the line of walking the camera will take.

Fake Blood - Amber

For our final scene we are having a character dead with a head wound or neck wound, possibly from hanging herself, maybe even self inflicted, this should remain a mystery for the cliffhanger, but it may also be murder. I thought a neck wound would be easy to achieve as there would be alot of blood and the wound would not be as visable as another place on the body.


To make the fake blood, I am going to mix red food colouring for the colour, flour for the texture and consistency. This worked really well as shown below, it gives a really good effect to fool the audience that the blood is real and there has been a murder.


As making the blood can be unreliable, i also chose to buy some fake blood from a joke shop, the consistancy was gloopy compared to the homemade mixture. But the colour and effect on the skin was better and more effective. So i chose to use this as well.
We are also going to make the wounds look more realistic with tomato ketchup, this gives a shiny effect, it can be applyed where and when needed as a backup and for last minute touches.

decsonstruction of smoking and beer

we also looked into weather the characters should be smoking roll ups or cigarettes and we decided to use a mixture of both as you would see a variety of the two at a party















also you can see two different types of beers. We narrowed the choice of beers down to stella and budwiser so we could decide whether we wanted the beers to be bottles or cans. overall we felt the cans would be better as the bottles look slightly posher than the cans and there is a danger issue with broken bottles. We will have mixture of mainly Stella and fosters cans.

Final title (ellen)

We decided on this style of writing for the title as we thought it was appropriate and would fit the genre and our own film. I decided to make the text red to make it stand out more and as the connotations are apropriate, with blood as it fits our genre and what happens in our film. I first tried a black background but that was too dark and unermined the brightness of the text, so I tried grey which made the red pop out much more and wasnt too dark and boring.

dead body deconstruction- Millie

This video has a very sinister feel to it due to the dark gloomy lighting. As the dead body is approached it has been tied up showing everything that has happened to the body has been against its own will which is a main element we will want to include in ours. the body looks old and rotten, due to the bones sticking out and the rotten skin, however we want our body to look quite fresh as if the murder had just happened. the clothes are wripped and stained which shows the body has been through a struggle, we will include this in ours to make the murder look more real. the wounds on the body are more like sores and puss where the body has not moved off the bed for so long but we will use cuts, bruises and stab wounds in our piece to show a quick murder.